Picturing an Essay
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Picturing a Biographical Essay

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Picturing a Biographical Essay

Pictures help visualize places, events, people, and ideas. In a biographical essay, the investigated person's family photographs, stills from home movies, and pictures of belongings validate that the individual really lived while adding information about the way that he or she looked and dressed. Sometimes, as in the case of Alonzo Bump, family photographs are not available. Instead of personal objects, an essayist may consider looking for images of the subject's surroundings. Are there era pictures of the person's place of work, residence, and home town? If not, does the building where the individual worked or lived still exist for a modern day photograph?

In the Alonzo Bump essay, a sketch of his employer, Saratoga Manufacturing, from about 1880, was found. The building likely looked very similar in 1862. For Harmony Mills, Alonzo's employer in Cohoes, a modern picture was chosen with the factory's decayed bricks and untended yard adding the texture of great age to a once vital plant.

Era photographs of general themes within an essay also help enliven content. Relative to the nineteenth century, the Mathew Brady Collection at the Smithonian Instituion Library offers over a thousand photographs of the Civil War ranging from scenes of battlefield death to military camp life. Other nineteenth century artists photographed, painted, or sketched western life, the Erie Canal, the Hudson Valley, victorian values, and the changing immigrant landscape.

Directions:
Provided on the next page are a series of about thirty-five photographs and sketches largely from the Civil War era on Microsoft Word documents. Select the documents which you feel are appropriate for the paragraphs in your A. S.

Saratoga Manufacturing Company
Victory Mills, New York, approx. 1880

Green essay. Cut and paste relevant parts of your writing into the text area. Save. When done, cut and paste the different pictured paragraphs into one complete story document. Create a title page and add your name to the page. Note: If you would rather use the website's A. S. Green essay, a copy is provided below.

As you look through the pictures, think about what the images add to your story that you could not have explained so easily in words. What are the soldiers wearing, for example? What is the condition of their tents? What does the Gettysburg convalescent camp look like?

Following the picture selection page, Kerry Sesil, a tenth grade student at Dominican Academy in New York City, offers two essays respectively about Alonzo Bump and Albert S. Green with pictoral illustrations as helpful guides.

 

Website's A. S. Green Essay

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